~ by yearzerowriters on July 25, 2010.

5 Responses to “Untitled”

  1. This is where poetry can be so superior to prose – when you manage to cram so much meaning into 10 lines. And it pivots on that 5th line, which frames the whole piece. Bravo.

  2. Yes – (for anything) – wow.

  3. A very beautiful poem. Well done.

  4. Beautiful. Clamour is one of my favourite words.

  5. Stuart, I never quite understand how it’s possible to convey so much in so few words. my poems are long, sprawly things, and when I read you and Sarah it’s like you’re using a different vocabulary where the words all have 20 meanings

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