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This is where poetry can be so superior to prose – when you manage to cram so much meaning into 10 lines. And it pivots on that 5th line, which frames the whole piece. Bravo.

Cody James said this on July 25, 2010 at 10:34 pm | Reply
Yes – (for anything) – wow.

Penny Goring said this on July 26, 2010 at 11:21 am | Reply
A very beautiful poem. Well done.

Amro said this on July 26, 2010 at 5:32 pm | Reply
Beautiful. Clamour is one of my favourite words.

S. Melville said this on July 26, 2010 at 10:49 pm | Reply
Stuart, I never quite understand how it’s possible to convey so much in so few words. my poems are long, sprawly things, and when I read you and Sarah it’s like you’re using a different vocabulary where the words all have 20 meanings

Dan Holloway said this on July 28, 2010 at 11:50 am | Reply

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