How One Of Them Remembers Their Conversation
Typical!
How can you say that to me?
Easy…
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Can’t you see?
No, I need more. I need you to feel
I’d throw everything overboard-
-I’m drowning already
-Just to be with you
I’m touched-
No really. Let’s move things forward
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I’M ALL CUT UP
How you do carry on Marc. I dare say this is a little one sided.
Perfectly executed as always,
well all of life’s a carry on really in’t'it? Or do I mean a carry out?
thanks 4 reading
marc x
Gruesome/real/ouch.
Close to half a love story as you’ll ever get. At least that’s the way I see it! Ha. But a hate story too and a I don’t know either way thing that is the stuff of life. From a psychology and consciousness standpoint spot on, can see all the different synapses firing and the words and meanings getting lost in the stew. This he said, she said, I meant, you meant when you said that I said etc etc. I liked the typ typ bits and sense of impetus and reaching for (understanding, connection, clarity?). That’s what I got from it anyway. Liked how it worked a lot.
There’s not enough adventure in my life, and now I know why. My sentences are way too long.
Excellent way to present the cycles and downward spiral of the relationship (I’m guessing) Be interesting to see the other half of the conversation…
Like the layout and questioning nature of this piece.
That’s an extraordinary piece of work. It really is how it goes sometimes, especially during moments of intense emotion, the brain gets stuck on just a few words (or images or, god forbid, something like yuck or ewww or is he done yet). I’ve never seen or heard of non-linear, I’d love to take a stab at it some day. Well done!
Cool. It’s like watching it go down the drain.
Nothing is really logical when you’re in a relationship…
Brilliant, as usual. It made me want to read it out loud, and that is something that rarely hits me.
I’ve never seen anything like this before. But, yeah, a little one sided. I am not sure whether to feel sorry for the person.
Good glimpse at reality thats for sure. Nice work
I like this. a leached pain in the words.